
I love to gaze upon March’s marsh
where prickly cat-tails take a bow,
after winter’s harsh wind did blow
across frozen lands high and low.
There I long… awaiting first spring
in its muddy melt of low marsh;
to listen for its whistling breath
after cruel winter’s lengthy death.
It’s here I feel sun’s first soft stretch
in longing buds atop bare limb;
branches which crackle, curse, and crunch
from winter’s folly, piercing punch.
I love to gaze upon March’s marsh
where feathered frenzy fill dark tree’s;
whose silhouette stand strong in skies,
as hope of spring in my soul flies!
I’m pushing the month along today over at dVerse later this afternoon? Happy Valentine’s Day!
i like feathered frenzy filled – but i do love alliteration
Initiated Kiss
great imagery, well written, well written
evocative landscape, our marsh is dry and crispy in the heat of summer, it is reassuring to see a cold marsh in contrast, balance.
muddy melt of low marsh…waiting for spring…oh i too can’t wait..deep sigh…very cool pic as well..
I’m with you…. Looking forward to march and its hope of Spring!
ahhh, the snow is thawing, Spring is on its way. I agree–a muddy marsh is a good sign!
Your poem perfectly mirrors your photo. This was lovely.
Lots of people have written about the coming of Spring this week – your carefully measured and skilfully evocative verses are my favourite treatment so far… With respect Scott http://www.scotthastie.com
Love the push for March, although I’m a Wintery man I do long for spring after a certain point. Great bit o’ writing.
Wonderful seasonal piece! Just lovely.
Mmmmm … lots of mmmmmm’s ~ it’s mmmmmm [denotes liking
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Love the suns stretch…love!
I can’t believe March is just around the corner… I can’t wait either. Such a lovely tribute.
Wonderfully written poem. I love the imagery and the included pic. It reminded me of my childhood, waiting for winter to end. Wonderful cadence and flow. Thank you for sharing this with us!
nice…muddy march and whistling breath…both great descriptors…and love the suns stretch….think i would get rid of spring in that line as it is inferred by your use above to tighten it up a bit…but love the feel of this piece…